Is the quote at the top a real quote or something added as a description? I've changed it slightly RCWizard 20:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Either way, it sounds much better now. I think it was probably just a description, though... It definitely couldn't have been a direct quote; the English was too disjointed for that. --CinnamonSpider 20:38, 10 July 2009 (UTC)